Readings for 3/31

In the Exploring the Past article, I could identify the students mentioned in the article that were reluctant, bored and complainers with several students in my own class. The project seems massive and appears to require lots of guidance and scaffolding from start to finish. However, I can see that using this method of writing, as opposed to simply doing a research report, would benefit students and create deep thinkers. As I read this article, I couldn’t help but think about how difficult it will be to conduct this type of learning experience in my 4th grade classroom. Just like we have discussed on numerous occasions, marination will be the key to helping students be successful.

In the Multigenre Research article, I loved the idea of organizing a notebook with samples(references), drafts, and pockets. I believe organization is a pitfall for many students. If we can model organization, planning and pacing for kids, they can use those skills for life. I think one of the toughest tasks will be to help students identify a topic that interests them enough to complete a multigenre project. However, the questioning techniques used in the article, as well as the organizational ideas, seem to provide support for the teacher and student.

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Response to the Memoir Article

I enjoyed Arnberg’s article A Study of Memoir. Her article brought clarity to my mind about the difference between memoir and autobiography. I liked the definition one of her students provided, ” It’s a snippet of a memory that a writer tells about after they have had time to think about it.”

I think Arnberg’s decision to immerse herself and her class in memoir texts before attempting writing instruction, helped construct the ground work for memoirs. I have read many of the picture books that she referred to in her article, however I never realized they were considered memoirs.

It would be nice to select a particular genre, like memoirs, and focus on it for an entire school year. Students would definitely benefit from an in-depth study, instead of jetting from one genre to another.

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My Poetry

My found poem.

My concrete poem about a light bulb.

I Am a Rock

My acrostic poem about my 2 daughters.

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A Concrete Poem

Fragile clear or frosted

glass illuminating a dark room

 or an obscured porch. Rarely fails at

 lighting the way. An energy receiver

dependent on an energy source to reach

 its potential. Consists of a filament, support

 wires, connecting wires, and inert gases.

Supported by an insulated, cork-lined,

conductive, metal base allowing electricity

 to easily flow through it. Used in lamps,

flashlights, headlights, ceiling

fans, and refrigerators. Usually

expires when you least expect it,

leaving you in the pitch black

darkness searching and

scrambling for a

spare.

 light bulb, light

bulb, light bulb

light bulb, light

bulb, light bulb

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Week 5 Readings and Links

I absolutely love the Online Poem Generator. We are using it in my class this week. It makes poetry fun and doable for kids. I enjoyed perusing all of the poetry links. Many of them will benefit myself and the students in my classroom.

I Am the Mummy Heb-Nefert is an excellent trade book written in poetic language. The illustrations and the content make it ideal to integrate into history/social studies. Atlantic would be great to use in geography and history. The use of personification throughout, as well as the point of view make this book  a good one to use with 4th graders. I think my students would really enjoy Dirty Laundry Pile:Poems in Different Voices. My personal two favorites in the collection are The Mosquito’s Song and The Cow’s Complaint. Often times we encourage students to put themselves in the place of the character…what would they do…what do they think. This book allows the reader to hear the object or character and get more of a feel for who or what they are. The I poems in all 3 of the books are very appealing to me.

I’m excited about incorporating poetry into content. Mimi and I have discussed how beneficial it could be for our students in reference to new material. I am contemplating doing my Poetry Assignment on rocks and minerals, pirates, or electricity and magnetism.

While reading Kucan’s article I kept thinking about a KWL chart. The idea of using the I poem before, during, and after reading could be used to foster comprehension of informational text, much like the KWL.

I am looking forward to sharing more of what I have learned about poetry with my students.

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Week 4 Readings

Flicker Flash by Joan Graham is a fascinating book of poetry. Her integration of art and words with objects is very creative and pleasing to a reader’s eye. My two favorite poems in the book are Campfire and Lighthouse.

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I have always been the most comfortable with using acrostics in class when dealing with poetry. There are several novels that my grade level uses where we construct an acrostic to describe a particular character. However, I have never thought of making the acrostics rhyme, nor have I thought of using different variations. My favorite acrostic is “Impalas in Peril”. I think it’s my favorite, because it was like solving a puzzle to find the 5th arrangement!

Silver Seeds  was another cute example of how acrostics can be used. Poetry is often thought of as a difficult genre for students. I think Silver Seeds would be excellent to use with younger grades.

The first paragraph in the article Extending Acrostic  Poetry into Content Learning: A Scaffolding Framework definitely described the poetry experiences in my classroom. As I mentioned before, acrostics have been my poetic form of choice. I agree that modeling is crucial for students, as well as showing them that teachers struggle to compose their thoughts too. Although I have model acrostics, I have never “immersed” my students with acrostics by other poets. Honestly, I never realized that books like African Acrostics and Silver Seeds  existed. I can see where providing such examples would build the students’ knowledge base. I loved the example in the article of integrating acrostics and informational text. What a neat way for students to report what they have learned about a specific topic. Next month my class will do a study of Blackbeard and other pirates, and I can’t wait to incorporate acrostics into our unit. Great article!!!

In chapter 9 of Elliott’s text, I was reminded that in order for children to acquire poetic language they must borrow words from other writers. Students would benefit from having a place, like a journal, to collect their words for future use. They also need to be reminded often to refer to their collection of borrowed words when drafting and composing.

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Class 4-Virtual Class Meeting

Response to Got Poetry? PPT:

I like Alice Schertle’s comparison of a poet to a photographer in her quote. Poems create a mental picture for their readers if the “right ” words are chosen. I think the list of questions that Ann Lauterbach has referenced for poetry would be beneficial to use with 4th graders when reading  poetry. They require them to think at a higher level about the poem. Susan Wooldrige’s quote, “It’s impossible to teach anyone to write a poem.” explains why I have been frustrated with my students and myself. It’s all about immersion and exposure.

A toolbox every poet needs: pen, pencil, keyboard, notebook, computer, dictionary, thesaurus, space to write, effective, sequential assignments (like the poetry stems). 

I love Kennedy’s advice … “imitate until eventually…you sound like yourself.”

Paper clip observations(SAID Strategy):

When I look at this object,  what do I see? tangled shiny metal

Smell? a metallic odor

Hear? when I drop it, it clangs on a hard surface

Taste? metallic…reminds me of a new filling in my tooth

Touch? rigid and cool

What does the object do? binds things together, organizes and groups related materials

What could you do with it? pick a lock, scratch the inside of your ear, reset a timer or stop watch, make a chain, hold a loose hem in a garment, as a bookmark, as a bobby pin

Where and when do you find it? in school, an office, a desk, a dorm room, in cups, in tote bags, in cardboard boxes, at an office supply store

When you think of it, what people, animals, places, actions, or ideas pop in your head? my assistant because she is so organized, school, a magnet because they are attracted to them, a snail curled up, a race track

How or why is it special? its unique design allows it to connect things together, inexpensive organizational tool

Other Link Responses:

Sharon Creech’s website is neat and updated. I enjoyed perusing her blog.

Joyce Sidman’s Poem Starters are fantastic! I am looking forward to experimenting with them. She has taken a lot of time to help teachers help students.

The Writing Fix would be a neat smartboard activity to practice constructing apologies.

I am amazed at all the resources you have listed for poetry. I am anxious to share them with my grade level and my curriculum coordinator.

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So Much Depends Upon…

My new walking shoes

So much depends  upon

my new walking shoes

constructed with  flexible cushioning

supporting my feet

making intense exercise more bearable

several days a week.

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My Journal Invitation

I created my journal invitation to look like a valentine. Each valentine is personally addressed to every student in my class.

Inside the invitation, they will find a personal invitation to journal, including what it is and all the details that they need to know about them. I also included the directions for their 1st entry. The students are to create a list of things they love. Lastly, I gave them a visual example of my list of things that I love. 

This is the front of my envelope that contains my invitation.

A full view of my invitation and its contents.

Front of my invitation.

Inside of my invitation.

Another layout of my invitation and its contents.

The invitation...explained.

Directions for my students’ 1st entry

An example for my students to see...Things I Love.

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Photographs…Future Poetry!

Buttercups that my mother-in-law needlepointed. This needlepoint piece hangs above my mantle.

My new walking shoes

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